Omega-Ravager's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dudstep (first dubstep)]

Not too shabby for a beginner

I liked the beginning and the drums, the chords you used for your "wob" wasn't too bad, try making it more bass and less treble, makes for a more powerful feel. .

Good start and keep working dubstep takes practice with synths, basslines, drums and everything else too, it's a pretty complex genre (not to say dance, techno and every other electric music it's just pretty unique. . .)

Good beginning, I see good things in the future!

Omega

(if you wanna hear an example of a heavier bassline check out "The composer" it's by far one of my better tracks!)

deslacoda responds:

Thanks for the advice, I'll try what you said. I also agree on the techical complexity of the genre. I'm kinda hoping that if I get to a decent level with Dubstep it'll improve the techniqal side of my other genres. Thanks for the feedback :)

[Walkin' Towards Some Memories]

Nice

Very good job, very chill, very RnB and had a good beat.

It was a little repetitive I didn't even really hear a "chorus" but it's a great song,

Good work

Omega

Stavier responds:

Thanx you very much. Yeah, I was tryin' to aim at the chill part.

[Lights and Shadows (WIP)]

Not bad. . .

I really like the piece as a whole, the ending has a more baroque feeling to it or something excellent counterpoint!

As far as the first half have you tried giving the guitar some "grunge" I'm trying to hear it in my head, and I think it would be a good improvement.

As far as continuing the song or an ending I don't really have any suggestions. . .
I have a hard enough time to come up with those for my songs. . .

Omega

[Summer Fireworks (Rough)]

Nice work

Nice work, I agree with DjClyme the bassline was kinda cheezy (heck, this whole piece was)

I really like the melody of it, maybe just make the bass a little heavier.
Haven't used LP at all, but you did a good job for your first song in a new program!

Good work!

Omega

[Enhanced SOund]

Ehhh

Not bad, I liked the intro.

That melody you brought in at :41 did not go with the main melodies return at :55 (the only thing I can see it being used as is some weird chase scene)

It just didn't really go with it, it was out of harmony. . .
I liked your synths and the drums weren't bad.

Only thing is the main part of the song was a out of tune or something. . .

Good effort, I can't really suggest some moderate changes cause you really have to pick between one of the two melodies, the dark one or the happy one.

It like trying to play in G maj in your left hand and F minor in the right. . .
Just doesn't mix well.

If you use the happy part, try picking something (maybe even the dark sounding synth) and then alter the notes in it so that it goes along rather than against the main melody.

Omega

DJPeanutbutter responds:

The second synth was to give the track a rave feel. But I suppose I failed at it >.< Im still a noob at producing though So its ok ^^

[Great Fairy Mountain]

Zelda is a good game series. . .

Not too shabby, I think it was a little overly simple (good job for practice) and that pad you introduced was a little out of place sounding. . .

Again not bad, just simple (one thing about the pad, it made it sound like it was about to explode into an epic dance piece. . . I might have to do that now.)

Omega

And check out my music if you want. I've got some good stuff (I think. . . :P)

Free2Play responds:

I totally would've busted into a dance, or did something more epic but I don't have the full FL studios and I can't save. I only did what I could within about 1 1/2 hours before I had to leave lol. It really was practice though, and yeah the pad could've been better, I think it was just too much going on maybe not sure.

[Paradise Falls]

I like it a ton!!!

The pad has a dissonance (the notes are right, just the way it sounds) but I really like the dissonance, it makes for a slightly tensed up air.

HUGE improvement, digging it!

Omega

Stavier responds:

Thanx you very much, yea an 8 is definetly good enough for me. Thanx again for reviewin' that it was better & be on the look out for my song Upbeat Life :)

[Reflections >Dubstep<]

Dub-epic!

Excellent work!

I'm a huge dubstep fan (everything from excision to dub-crooks to Xkore, bar9, flux pavillion. Basically everything)

But too much dubstep is just KICK SNARE WOBOWBOWOBWOWBWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!

And this brings a classical element to the aforementioned timbre.
A mixing of epic proportions!!!

Props for keeping it from falling apart cause of all the different sections.

I do agree with everyone, there sure is some mixing you could fix (couldn't tell you how, I'm still learning. Just have an ear for it)

But you've blown everything straight outta the water with this,

So congratulations epic work!

Omega

(I'd really appreciate it if you'd give my stuff a listen, at least one song ;) how bout my "One more day" track. Thanks!)

mr-jazzman responds:

Haha I love how you mention xKore as a classic dubstep producer, when him and I are in the same boat trying to get our stuff known lol! Thanks for the honest review man, much appreciated! =)

[(Dj Organix) The Eclipse]

Nice.

I agree with botdog, if you took this exact song and put a heavier kick and a slammin bass it'd be awesome!

I really like it right now, you did a good job with arrangement of the notes, just could be a little heavier.

Omega