Omega-Ravager's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flying Through the Eclips]

Nice work!!!

Awesome song, not too crazy, but upbeat for trance.
I like your buildup a lot, simple, but it sounded great.

The whole thing had a very driving beat, it came mostly from the background synth, it held everything together well and I really like the sound of it.

I would have liked to see another synth or two in there to switch it up.
This could easily be extended to a six minute song with an interlude or another chord movement :P not that 4 mins is bad for a song, much better than many I've see here, and also not too short, it just could have been that much more awesome if you would have done something more.

Overall great work, pretty chill and still something you could jog or work out to!

If ya don't mind check out my stuff, I'm just starting out with composition, let me know what you think and maybe when I get the full FL studios (not just the demo) we could collab on some crazy awesome music? Lemme know.

Anyway great job,

Omega

Omnivore responds:

Sure, I'll check it out... Anyway, I wouldve added some extra synths in the lead and/or background, but my CPU usage went crazy on me, thus forcing me to make the song before it crashes! Well, its better than absolutely not having the song!

~FurryNG

[CNS]

Nice and chill

I like this a lot, its simple not really elegant but very enjoyable.

I think this is really trance, but it's sometimes a fine line. . . no points docked for my opinion of genre, good music is good music :P

Most of your synths were kinda samey, not so much that it gets boring but it could be more interesting if you threw in some new timbres. . .

Nice work overall, I like your style of music!

Omega

LetterKilleth responds:

You are right, it needs to be re-made with more dynamics. Thanks for feedback!

[Lost (WIP)]

Great WIP!

I really liked it, and the wobble you brought in sounded great!

I didn't like the change at 1:36, it was a bit abrupt. . .
Instead of going straight to that, why not mix the wobble in with the first piano melody, and then progress to that change, it would be smoother and would add some filler time.

JK XD but its usually a good idea to build onto your main theme before changing it up.

Great work so far, looking forward to a completed version!

Omega

(Check out my stuff sometime, if it ever gets approved :P, guess that's part of being new. . .)

joemamabeach responds:

You are right about 1:36 didn't notice it at first. Will adjust. Thank you!

[=Nightfall=]

Not bad. . .

I liked it, and you instrumentation was excellent.

Your first verse seemed out of cadence, the way you were speaking was out of sync with the song.
The lyrics were good, and so were the instruments just the way you sing your verses was a little off sounding. Some of them could have been sung quicker and it could have been really great, the chorus is a good example, it sounds great.

You have a good voice, just work on your cadence a bit.

I really enjoyed it, good job overall,

Omega

DJVigil responds:

thank you for your review Omega, I will certainly take your words into consideration!

[Curb Servers (Original Mix)]

Pro quality!

Awesome job, everything sounds great!

Can't really come up with anything I dislike about this.

The ending was good, you can loop it or stop it right there. That's hard to do.

I didn't get boring at all, you switched it up enough that it was interesting but not so much you couldn't follow the main melody.

Nice beat!

Omega

TheTriangle responds:

This is my probably my best song so far and thanks for the feedback man i appreciate. If you like my music check out all my songs on soundcloud.

www.soundcloud.com/youngcanyon

[Gone Astray]

Impressive

I like the instrument selection and the lyrics were cool and well sung too (that's important)

The chorus, was hard to understand, it was very quiet.
And your lyrics could be bettered by also making them a little louder so they stuck out over the music

other than that, awesome song great work!

Omega

SoulSecure responds:

I mixed it that way on purpose. I didn't want vocals prevailing over the music that I poured my heart into. The vocals are there to compliment the music, rather than the other way around. Of course, you're hearing it through computer speakers, not a stereo system (which it is mixed for).

Also, I put the lyrics in the description because I knew that people don't usually understand the lyrics in my songs the first time they hear them.

[(PM)-Frozen]

Holy crap!

Great song, reminds me a bit of "still waiting" mixed with the song "Frozen Underground" by TBB; both of which are great songs.

I really liked the "whip" snare, it sounded really good.
I can't really hold anything against it, it's not as stompy as I like my house, but it's just beautiful, screw stomping I'll listen to good music over heavy noise everyday.

Fantastic work,

Omega

Parkerman1700 responds:

Thanks for the great review man!
Your compliments are encouraging.

I'll have to check out those songs now, thanks for the review!

[Leaving the Citadel]

Not Mass effect (fooled me) :P

Starts out pretty calm, yet nervous. The drums add intensity, till it drops a bit then returns kinda to the original feel, this time more agitated. after that it's a little repetitive
but the ending progression was solid and sounded good but you kinda just looped it a little too much too, the fade out worked for this song, so I won't knock it :P

Instead of just looping the original two sections, switch it up a bit, helps from getting boring after a bit.

Pretty good job overall, switch up your melodies some more and this is easily a 10.

Omega

1cc1 responds:

Great, thank you for your input. I was thinking it was a bit repetitive, I'll mess around with the beginning 2 parts. The fade out is a bit of a cop out but I'm glad it worked!
Thank you for listening!

~DoJ

[I Remain]

Butterscoth yo

JK, this is awesome. Respect

As a Fan of everyone from Five Finger Death Punch to Demon Hunter and beyond this is just awesome, I'd recommend adding another two verses or so, maybe something like:

They're working hard, they fight for you!
All against me, fighting through!
The horde is coming, coming for you!
To take you up and embrace you,
to tear you up in their collective!
But through the lies I see the truth!

(I'm not a lyricist at all)
Your vocals are top notch, and this goes right on the ipod.

When are you coming in concert near me ;)

Awesome track,

Omega

Satoris responds:

Haha thanks a lot man! Unfortunately what you hear is what you get but I'm diggin' the third verse. You should use it for one of your own songs! Anyway, thanks again for the vote and review, I'm the drummer but I'll be sure to tell Paul (the vocalist) what you said. Also unfortunately we're only playing in/around Ohio right now but once the album releases we're hoping for a tour! Keep checking back on Facebook!

[very creative beat (i hope)]

Nice

I like the beat, pick a cool synth to make a melody with and you got some great potential in this track.

This is so trippy, it's forcing me to nod my head.

Keep working at it, being musical doesn't happen over night, so keep working till you get the hang of it

Looking forward for a tune to jam to,

Omega

killerhoofd responds:

haha yeah man!

thanks